Writing

The sky was red a old man was sad because he dropped his box his air balloon stopped gliding in the sky it was stell up then a flying.Then The old man saw a flying turtle he jumped on the flying turtle the turtles went to a green land the land was called  flying turtle Island the box was there but it was fake then they went to the island of snow when they got there was  it was snowing there was a anther box this time inside it had his photo of his family.

THIS IS A DRAFT POST COMMENT ON WHAT I NEED TO WORK ON.