The tree

One night I was walking in the forest. All of a sudden I saw a brige I had a sign to the hunted tree please cross do not cross then I crossed the brocken brige there was a tree and it had a door.I walked in the tree then a vine fal on the door the vine had a pass word thing it had the numbers 12345678910 I enter loots of passwords **** then           
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Then I entered the coreted password **** and I got out But a lion chased me and I made it home the lion didn't make it.

This is my draft piece of writing.Please leave a comment adout what I need to work on.