One
day I was eating in a giant black cave but then the rocks collapsed. I was
stuck in a rock pile! I shouted out ‘Mum, dad!’ but they couldn’t hear so then
I started digging my way out. But it was too hard. I saw a beam of light
shining from heaven. Out came a pickaxe. I used the pickaxe to crush the rocks.
It was as loud as a bomb. When I was out of the pile the sky was black. Then a monster
appeared it was the destroyer of destroyers ... Then I woke up it was just a
nightmare!
To Aaron
ReplyDeleteI like how you put I was eating in a big black cave.
How did the rock fall on you?
From Titus
Thank goodness it was only a nightmare!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good writing.
Mrs H(team 100wc).