writing

The brave boy is going down the magic slide the sign said do not go down the slide.
The magic slide transport the boy to the blue planit lAtNn the planet thats cold the monsters were thinking the bog thought the plans the bog ran and ran the bog said ...


To be contued

This is a draft post.Comment for any misstates.

I love learning

This my I love learning poster.
http://www.ilovelearning.org.nz/

Olympics

The yellow star Moon

Today we watched a video clip For writing and this is my writing.

One night  Grandad took me fishing.Then he felt a pull then he pulled the moon then  Grandad told me to hook the yellow moon when I  hooked the moon and yellow stars came out then Grandad told me to came back.I came back with a star then we went home to sell the star then Grandad said it is Xmas they put the star on top of the Xmas tree and they did it every Xmas.

This is draft a piece of writing.plase make a comment on what I did well and what I can work on.